衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
Nowadays,more and more students pay less attention on spelling on learning English.For example,with the development of the tecnology,they often use computer to write their feelings and talk with others instead of writing by hands. There are some reasons about why a lot of students pay little attention on spelling in learning English,one of which is that students spend much time on playing computer games,less in study.What's more,students were asked to go to all kinds of lessons,so they can't concentrate their heart in spellig. In order to change this condition,I think that what we should do is to think highly of spelling.because it is of great important for us to put our soul and heart into spelling.Only in this way can we do better and better in spelling.