2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

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As we all kow,the waste is very serious.Espscially in school,more and more students always buy much food,at last,throwed much.We should take attition with it . As fas as I am concerned,The wast is very bad.First of all,we should buy something which we need,which can save much money.Besides,we can get much respect from others.What is more,we can tell more people to built the save opinion. As a student, how can we save? One,we can tell our friend to see us.Apart from it,we can write some sentis to remind us.Last,we can to watch some video,which about the