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行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多。
China is large country consist of fifty six natonalities. among which there are many minority nationalities ,therefore,there is no doubt ,there are kinds of dialects .but are dialects just as acceptable in public place? in my opinion ,dialect is not acceptable and even not welcome in pubilc place.as I metioned above ,there are various dialect so that is not possible for everyone to learn each dialect or not even to use them. To be fair ,our government establish the policy that everybody speak mandery in pubilc place to let communication go smoothly and to show respect to others. hence,in order to avoid the msunderstanding and make everyone invloved in convetsation informed ,mandery is official language and dialect is not acceptable . To conclude my piont, in order to build a harmonious conversation atmosphere ,and let every body enjoy communication exchange with others . please hide your dilect in pubilc and try your best to speak mandery. thanks .
