英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 专业八级> 真题> 2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10553
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

China is a large country consist of fifty six nationalities. among which there are many minority nationalities ,therefore,there is no doubt ,there are kinds of dialects .but are dialects just as acceptable in public place? in my opinion,dialect is not acceptable and even not welcome in public place.as I mentioned above ,there are various dialect so that is not possible for everyone to learn each dialect or not even to use them. To be fair ,our government establish the policy that everybody speak mandery in pubilc place to let communication go smoothly and to show respect to others. hence,in order to avoid the misunderstanding and make everyone invloved in convetsation informed ,mandarian is official language and dialect is not acceptable . To conclude my piont, in order to build a harmonious conversation atmosphere ,and let every body enjoy communication exchange with others . please hide your dilect in pubilc and try your best to speak mandery. thanks .

会员评论0个评论)
Timhorton
金币:3

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:87.5LONGJINWEI

人气:229发布:2013-06-04

得分:87.5714276417

人气:55发布:2014-06-19

得分:86.5李晓鹏123

人气:584发布:2014-03-10

得分:86.5シ顾赏梦乄

人气:67发布:2015-12-16

得分:85.0chri12stin

人气:72发布:2014-06-06