小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Niki seven years old,she is a outgoing girl, she likes soprts, singing and playing with her friends.She is good at badminton, we are usually paly badminton together. She doesn't likes math, She failed in math last week.Every day, we go to school together and go back home together, we are good friends.