2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Computer and Man Nowadays, computer plays increasly role in our life. People may think different of computer,but there's no dubte it is taking a great efficiency in the world. There are many points about the relation of computer and man.Some people believe that computer change human soictey.In emconoy, it's so convenient to do business with all parts of the world, and make the produrce of transaction easily. In our work and daily life, the computer can save a lot of resource. We can write an atricle in computer instead of paper. Also, we can keep a number of files in computer.However, others don't appreciate the computer. In ascepts, the computer takes people lots of time to work and amuse. In respects, the computer gets in the way people communication with each other face to face. It will contirbute to people can't talk with real people . As far as I'm concerned, I surely agree the computer makes a big contribute in our society. Our world can't made prograss without computer, and man also can't life better without it.