2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

with the popularity of the computer,the relation bewteen computers and men is closed.People don't leave the computer gradually.So,many begin to community. Absolutely,people who often suffer the net think computers is helpful.it can help us to deal with some problems,provide a flat of community,send messages,control devices and so on.What's more,we can learn knowledge by the computer.However,oppositor think it make children fall into computer game.The computer convey some awful messages to kids by internet.people lack community face to face because of the computer.in addition,people's eyes can be hurt by looking the screen of computers. As we all know,the computer can take a colorful world to us,it can make some things convinent,it can also take much information.it is really useful.But it have bad influence.sometimes,it can also error news.it can hurt peple's healthy.So,we should use the computer in a degree.and we should use the computer correctly.