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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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Nowadays, the connection between man and computer is becoming closer since computer's appearance.What is obvious is that most man can not live without computers.Because people work , shop on the Internet through computers.iAt the same time, with the help of computers, many scientists can finally solve difficult problems in many fields,such as medical, physical,biological problems. What impresses me most is that we even do not need to write on papers, but type on the computer with a software called Microsoft Office word, which makes it possible for people to contact with each other by e-mails and share information by surfing, not books. In addition, instead of having classes by blackboards, teachers now can type what they are going to teach on the computer . It is more convenient for not just the teachers but students. Although there are more newly technological and scientific products, computers are still important for human being's life.

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