题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
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computer and man With the development of science and technology,computer as a electronic tool is widely used in our society,more and more people unable to work or study without it.Obviously,it is palying a essential role in our daily life. Although computer bring benefits to us,there still have other questions need to solved. On the one hand,computer let more convenit for our work and study life,such as shopping at home,we only need open copmputer and kick on the keyboard, which finish the shopping time happyly.However,computer also bring bad affection to us. For instance,because of the computer's appendicx ,computer games let some students who be interersted in lose themselves in it ,it's not only affect their study merit,but also affect their physical and mental healths. In a word,computer is a sword which have advantage and disadvantage to man. So we must keep a correct attitude to treat it ,let it benefit to us .