2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

welcome to our club First：our club is have a lot of different friend，you can have more friend at our club and you have similar interest。 second ：our club have a lot of activity，you can join in a many at spare time。enrich your spare time。let your extra time very happy and rich