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With the increase of the students pay less attention to the study of English,with this phenomenon people aware of the importance of Chinese study. If the study of Chinese should be given? Of course not. Why this phenomenon have happen to the students?The reason can be list as follow.On one hand ,the adults always pay more attention to the foreign language,the mach and dancing ect. More and more after class ativities makes them have less their own time to study Chinese.On the other hand,some of students have great faith on their Chinese, they think to study Chinese is a waste of time.It's no necessary to study Chinese ,because of they are Chinese!That is no good for our teenager.It may lose our own tradition and our letrature. Therefore, is necessary to learn a foreign language or something you have interested.But is also necessary to study Chinese ,there are more important to any Chinese.Don't give it!You can get more thing in it.