题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
Today,more and more people are not trust others because we are cheated sometimes.For example,when you in the train state,someone will go around you and steal you money or things.Therefore,we dare not trust starngers.But,it is important for us to maintaining trust. Firstly,on maintaining trust can bring happiness for us.We need make more and more friend in society .If we want make true friends,we must trust them,as is going to say,a friend in need is a friend indeed.Only in this way,can we have a good friend.Secondly,on maintaining trust will make us succeed.You feel bule and upset when you failue,while if you boss courages to you,you will want try again to make progress because you want not let someone who trust you to feel hopeness. On maintaining trust is necessary for us.There are some people whose faces you can never forget,just beacuse they trust us when we want to give up.Let us turst,let us make the world beautiful.