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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46273
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Our world is full of competition.People who has actual will be used.And as we know ,education is the best way to improve public's ablity.From this picture we can find some regulation. The most high unenployment rate is 14.1%.These people is less than high school diploma,and their weekly earing is just 451$.As the level of degree rise,unemployment rate is down,and people'sweekly earning is rise.A professional's weekly earning is 1665$ and unemployer just is 2.4%. Ofcause degree is a symbol of capablity.More company would employ people who has high level degree.And they will get high salary at the same time.If we accept more education before working.We will more easily to live in the future.

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