2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays As far as we can see form the statistics n the figure,there is a normol phenomanon that much education pays can not only make median weekly earnings rate high,but also making the unemployment rates low.Otherwise,the less education pays you pay,the higher unemployment rate and the lower earnings rate you get. Evidently,these rates are relvent to the education.Why does the phenomanon come out?Form my point of view,first,if someone get much education that he or she has a great number of knowleage of this area and the boss will regard you as a master.Whatmore,it is important to konw how to be a good person,and many teachers can taech you to be a great person.So,what a impertance education has. To sum up,everyone want to have a good job.To make this dream come ture we should study header and enrich yourself.