题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Today,more and more people do not trust others because we are cheated sometimes.For example,when you shopping,someone will go around you and steal you money or things.Therefore,we dare not trust strangers.But,it is essential for us to maintain trust. Firstly, trust others can bring happiness for us.We need make friend in society .If we want to make true friends,we must trust them,proverb says a friend in need is a friend indeed.Only in this way,can we have a good friend.Secondly, trusting will make us succeed.You feel blue and upset when you failue,while if you boss trusts you,you will want to try again and make progress ,because you want not let someone who trust you to feel hopeless. On maintaining trust is necessary for us.There are some people whose faces you can never forget,just because they trust us when we want to give up.Let us trust,let us make the world beautiful.