Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As far as we can see form the statistics n the figure,there is a normal phenomenon that much education pays can not only make median weekly earnings rate high,but also making the unemployment rates low.Otherwise,the less education pays you pay,the higher unemployment rate and the lower earnings rate you get. Evidently,these rates are relevant to the education.Why does the phenomanon come out?Form my point of view,first,if someone get much education that he or she has a large number of knowledge of this area and the boss will regard you as a master.Whatmore,it is important to know how to be a good person,and many teachers can teach you to be a great person.So,what a importance education has. To sum up,everyone wants to have a good job.To make this dream come true we should study header and enrich yourself.