2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As far as we can see form the statistics n the figure,there is a normal phenomenon that much education pays can not only make median weekly earnings rate high,but also making the unemployment rates low.Otherwise,the less education pays you pay,the higher unemployment rate and the lower earnings rate you get. Evidently,these rates are relevant to the education.Why does the phenomenon come out?Form my point of view,first,if someone get much education that he or she has more professional knowledge of this area and the boss will regard you as a master.Whatmore,it is important to know how to be a good person,and many teachers can teach you to be a great person.So,what importance education has. To sum up,everyone wants to have a good job.To make this dream come true we should study header and enrich yourself.