2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Should parents send their kids to art classes? Recently,a picture was firmly remembered in my mind,which shows that a child ,with backpack on his shouder,seems to be coaxed by his mother to somewhere.However,the mother looks confused about which art class should she chooes,with plenty of money on her hands.It's common situation where parents send their children to some kinds of art school,for instance,singing,drawing or even in terms of chess. Considering this phenomenon,some people demonstrate their agreement for the reason that the fierce of competition attracts parents forcing their children to acquire more professional skill to be the second to none.On the contrary,lots of people think that sending their kids to art classes is a way to rob kids' leisure time.It may be result kids' inhibition or bad characters. In my opinion,the heart of education is not grades and test,but freedom and habit-developing.Parents should let their kids cultivate their own habit.Only in this way can kids develop in a broad way.