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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；采用了一些简单的从句；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
Nice to see you guys.My name is Mary.And you are so young,and this situation puts year on me and remind me of the fact that I am older than you!So how lucky you are! And you should make advantage of the time,then do want you guys should to do, want you guys want to do.I am very glad to be your oral English teacher this semester,I hope that we can get along well and improve our English together.
