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Private Car Should Not Be Taxed For Pollution With the development of increasing economy, there are more and more cars in the road and it wil cause much more pollution. Therefore, the governments try to make some measures to control this situation. One of the plans is putting a pollution tax on private car. In my eyes, it is not the appropriate way to control the private cars users and protect our enviornment. This measure is not fair for some private cars' users who is not very richer than some others. The comparatively poor people will choose to use other vichels and the private car users will give up the private car. In contrast, the richer people will continue to use private cars for they are not concern this little money for pollution tax. At last the members of using privte cars are the rich people and the quantity of private cars will not decrease. Putting pollution tax of private cars is not the exclusively methods to decease the quantity of private cars and we should make our endeavours to find out some other plans. For example, the government could make measure like that one family just can buy one private car. All in all, putting pollution tax for private car is not the most appropriate way for controlling quantity of private cars. It is high time that the government should study some other plans .
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