Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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This week,I bought Three Days TO See.Actually,I wanted to read it long time ago.So I'm determined to read it patiently.Above all,the happiest thing is that we have a seven-day holiday.I can relax myself and I can go back home.I missmy mother so much. During the National Day,I met my friends and chatted each other's university life.I found that the sleep in my own house was so sweet.However,the train was too crowed.There were so many people return their homes.