题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
On maintaining trust With the rapid development of modern society,people are more and more cautious,because they are afraid of being theft. In modern society,competition are becoming more fierce than before.The relation of people become poor,they don't trust each other.In order to obtain the first place,they usually keep secrete about what they do.Then they lack of communication with others.People live in a community don't realize each other, and keep their children from other's so that to keep their kids safety.People become not familiar with each other.These are not good for our society and our people,and then harmful to our life.So we should do something to change these situation. As the situation is more serious, we should take an emergency measure to stop it. only in this way can we live in a better and comfortable world.