Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;使用了简单的从句;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
This week,I saw a film in our school.The film named IF ONLY.It was a loving movie.After seeing that ,I knew the importance of treasuring.It was moved me a lot too. There were so many cluds inviting our Grade One students.Our school was so bustling.Each of us could choose two to join in.I was neverous about what to choose. Every week,I have lots of homework.I think the life of university is not as relax as Iimaged before.I will spend more time studying nor playing.