2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the ecnomocy developing,computers are more and more relected with us. However,many people have different ideas about computers.One hand,some people think computers take people much time to play games,chat qq.Thus,they have little time chat with parents or take a trip.And always playing games is bad for your eyes.A lot of teachers say when they ask students to write a composition students usually copy with computer.The other hand think computers are very convenient.Moreover,they can be relaxed by playing computer games,lestening music and so on by computer.They can also get much knowledge which they do not know.The most important is they can make friends who have the same hobby. As computers,different people have different views.In my opinion,people can not leave computers but we should make a good use of them.