2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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I and computer In the morden society, the internet appears gradually, so more and more people substitute book and magzine with internet. The difference between the book and internet embodys that it is not convinient to restore and check information on book, the book is not free and newspaper needs special news writer to create, but it is easy to restore oninternet,and information on internet is almost free, anyone else could express their feeling and idea. The common ot both emphasizes the lastest news. There are attractive titles and colourful pictures which expressd by advertised for profit. On my view, i support internet resourse for tremendous information. At the same time, computer plays a big role. So we have to pay enough attention to it.