2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Benefit and challenges of Onlion shopping Online shopping is becoming more and more popular.And it is good for the customs to buy the things that they need.The reason has as follows. It is convenient to buy some things.When they are busying,they can save time to buy their needing things through online shopping.And whenever late,you can buy it.What's more,it is cheap for partly things.But it faces many challenges for people who wants to do it well.It is untrue.The customs can be cheatted. In my opinion,you can buy some small goods through the Internet.But you can not trust all things you meet.