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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色。

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