2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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With the development of education,a great of parents are willing to spend large money in their children.At this surroundings,a large part of them choose send their kids to the art classes that can improve cultivation.However,this phenomenon trigger a critical anger.My opinion about this issue will offered in the following essay. Oridinary people hold the view that kids learn more better than less.In spite of kids has heavy impressin to learn about art.When it comes to issue,the other individuals hold different opinion.They think is wasting money and time to make kids learn sbjuect that have no interest. As far as I am concerned,kids also need respect from their parents.Parents shouldn't press kids to learn that the unwilling to except things.