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My opinion on certificate craze. There a heated discussion whether should we take many tests for certificate.Does anyone hold the same attitude this issue? Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that certificate is extraordinary useful.Firstly,if a man have many certificates will be beneficial for his work,especially when he need a job,the HR will be attracted for his certificates,therefore his chance will be increased.Secondly,For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job. However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that certificate craze is informally.For one thing,take a lot of tests will take a large amount of money.That's a burden for an ordinary family.For another,the most important key must be practice not all kinds of certificates for HR. To my way of thinking,I agree with latter opinion.In the first place,certificate craze is unwise. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one's ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.We students should increase our real ability.Additionally,if we can keep balance in practise and certificate,we can have a good future,I believe.
