托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第2篇:学校是否应教学生一些求职技巧

作者词汇基本功很好，学术词汇表达也比较恰当；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Schools are often successful at educating their students in a large number of different topics. Nevertheless, it is my opinion that schools, particularly universities, colleges, and high school, should focus on teaching their students' knowledge they will need for specific careers and jobs. To begin with, school must prepare their students for life after graduation by teaching them about careers and jobs. By doing so, students can get ready to enter the job market once they graduate either from college or high school. Sometimes, schools do and unsatisfactory job of preparing students for their future careers. These students often have trouble getting jobs or keeping them once they get hired. By focusing primarily on students' future careers, the students will be equipped with the knowledge necessary to excel at their jobs and to keep them once they get hired. A second point is that if schools offer career education, students can avoid learning unnecessary knowledge. Much of the knowledge currently taught at schools will not be used at all after the students' graduate, so they have no need to take some classes that schools offer. For instance, I am no interested in working in a field that requires math. Therefore, while I should know some elementary mathematics, I do not feel it is necessary for me to learn calculus or trigonometry. Likewise, a future engineer should not bother with learning literature or history. By focusing only on the classes students will need in their future careers, schools can eliminate lessons that are useless. Also, having students focus on their careers and jobs increase the rate at which students acquire knowledge in those fields. This is important because career education usually involves the actual practicing of hands-on activities. Some students, for example, get to do internships at companies before they graduate. This gives them a great opportunity to learn about their field of study. If all students had chances like this, then they would all be much more knowledgeable in their fields. In conclusion, I really believe schools need to focus on teaching their students about specific careers and jobs. By doing so, schools can cut down on the useless knowledge being taught while simultaneously equipping their students to be outstanding workers in their fields. This is why 丨 support having student study only one or two core subjects. Some people believe schools should only teach students subjects that will be important to their students' future careers or jobs. However, I reject this notion and instead believe that schools should teach students a wide range of subjects. The first reason is that by learning a wide range of subjects, students can get a general knowledge of many different fields of study. People should know how the world works, which they can do by studying many different subjects. Personally, while I do not like every school subject I take, I recognize their importance. I will never major in science, but I still think it is essential for me to learn chemistry, biology, and physics. By studying these subjects, I can learn about what the world is made up of and how things work. This information may not be enough to use for any future job, but it is important for my development as an educated person. Additionally, we must remember that changing careers would be incredibly difficult if people had little or no knowledge about other subjects. Without this basic knowledge, people would find it virtually impossible suddenly to quit one career and begin another. I have read about businessmen who quit their jobs to become teachers and scientists who decide they want to run a company. Fortunately for them, they have some basic knowledge from taking many different classes, so they can make these changes. If people only study one subject at school, however, they will practically never be able to change even if they strongly dislike their chosen career. Finally, nowadays people are tending towards interdisciplinary studies, which require knowledge in multiple fields. People like interdisciplinary studies because they can utilize information from various subjects like physics and history or chemistry and computers to solve their problems. I have heard that by using problem-solving techniques for one subject in a different field, people have successfully solved difficult problems. Interdisciplinary studies require people to think creatively and approach problems in unique manners. However, such creativity will not be possible if people cannot take lessons in multiple fields. I strongly believe students should take a wide range of courses and not merely take classes they need for their careers since knowing about many subjects make well-balanced, educated people and helps them makes well balanced, educated people and help them change careers and solve difficult problems. It is important that people continue studying a large number of different subjects.