2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章用词太过单一，注意少数拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,online shopping is is becoming more and more popular among the people's life.It is essential to purchase the goods when it is late.People can purchase somethings what they need by the online.It is convenient for us to buy through online shopping.In my opinion,it is benefit for us to buy.So,we can take advantage of the platment to buy the goods.