2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays there is a phenomenon that the excessive packaging.Some people says that the goods should be packaged beautiful,so that they could send it to their friend.The businessman catches this mind,they packaging the goods excessively,and selling too expensive to earn the profit. I think excessive packaging is wasting the energy of the earth.Giving the gift is a wonderful thing but excessive packaging made it change.Excessive Packaging is to waste and no need to do this.I suggest everyone resist Excessive packaging,do not buy excessive packaging things,so that they disappear from our sight. Excessive packaging is a bad thing to our environment,and people's live,so we should resist them.