2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Just as saying "No competition,No progress." So there are many parents to send their kids to art classes in order to improve their competition.People's ideas vary. Some people hold that the idea that they in favor of the behavior of parents send their kids to art classes.To start with, taking part in the art classes will enlarge the knownedge to some extent.What's more, studying others classes are better than you never study anything.Kids will become most excellent others who only study in school.Last but no least,live and learn is everyone persues aim.However, some people disapprove of it. On the one hand,students have a pressure from school.They don't have time to do other things they like if you still send them to art classes.On the other hand,there are less and less students feel cherful in theirchildhood.They eager freedom and happiness. As far as i'm concerned,I disagree to send kids to art classes.The object of education is happy study.When you force your kids to do some things they don't like.Thus they will lose the motive power of life.