2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of computers,computers are becoming the department of our daily life.just like we can't live without computers. Computers make our lives easier and colorful.With the help of computers and the network,we can buy almost everything within home instead of go shopping.We can learn everything that happen in the world on the Internet.With the help of computers,we don't have to go to school to study or go to company to work. However,computers also bring us some trouble.For example,people have less and less chance to chat face to face but chat on line,which makes people more difficult to develop lifelong friendships with each other. Everything has two side.We should make full use of its advantages and try to avoid its disadvantage.