2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer was one of the best invents in 20th centry bringing nornemours infect to our life . It becomes the neccesary to our life、work and so on. Save imformation become the truth througth it. Computer touch each other together let the world become smaller. So called erth vallager was formed when computer appearred.