2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of financial.more and more people like go shopping on internet. Today, online shopping is became the one of the fashion system.In my opinion, online shopping is convenient for people save much time to do else things.especially ,in summer, weather is hot ,people don't like went out home.online shopping is salved the problem ,you can bought anything ,the price is lower than street stone .so,we can benefit a lots by online shopping.