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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达丰富多彩，但是要留意单词拼写。
In the present age, it has to say that humanity has been making a large progress in vast number of fields.However,what fact can not be ignored is that it still exists a multitude of weakness that deserve the human being to improve. In this article,I will analyse in which areas we have got brilliant achievements and in the modern society, what respectd we should pay attention to. Actually , in terms of technology, people have made a huge stride.To be exact , several years ago, it was unbelieveable for citizens that the computers would find it way into every household; several hundred years ago , flying in the sky and travelling another country within five or six hours was just a unpractical ambitiom.Therefore, there is no doubt that the advanced technology has already improved human race's life and promoted dramatically the quality of individuals' live.Also, as for the eduation, nothing has more breakthroughs than this area.In recent years ,both citizens and governments have concentrated on the level of children's education,at the same time, the authority contributes to students' all-around development financially and mentally.Thus ,there are increasing schools and institutions opened available to those kids who have no money to receive education. On the other hand, some issues, in our current societym,still attract public's atterntion and put potential damages in human's existence.First of all , the widespread deterioraion of ecosystem never fails to influence social development.Specifically, the waste of water and wood, the contiminations in the rivers and oceans, the progressing death of rare animals are the severe disater that let people's live get into delimma.Meanwhile, in the real society, the wars and battles consistently give rise to destroy and fear in general people's daily basis and affect the relationship among countries so that the development of globe shows the sign of slowing down.Last but not least, the rate of crime still soars in rencent years and what makes matter worse is that the juvenile delinquence has become a huge event in every nation. In a nutshell, no one can denny that the man has created enormous as well as miraculous magics in various fronts.However, as a matter of fact , there is still much to be done to make our world better.
