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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):Stars and False Advertisements

发布时间:2013-10-12 16:56浏览次数:336
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
While many Chinese catch up on their favorite movies during the weeklong National Day vacation,a woman in south China's Jiangxi Province is waiting for a local court to respond to her request to sue(起诉)a movie star.
“She should pay for cheating customers with false advertising,” said angrily 43-year-old Lu Ping.She filed a lawsuit(诉讼)against Carina Lau,a Hong Kong star,who appeared in advertising for Japanese cosmetics(化妆品)brand SK-Ⅱowned by Procter & Gamble.
Lu saw the advertisement in a fashion magazine in January last year,in which Carina claimed that using the product for four weeks could help “reduce wrinkles(皱纹)by 47 percent and make you appear 12 years younger”.Because she is about the same age as the actress,Lu decided to try out the product.
She bought a bottle of skin-tightening,anti-wrinkle facial milk.But 28 days later,her skin had not become silky.Instead,her face became itchy and she felt a burning sensation.
[写作内容]
最近,许多明星代言的产品经检验后,存在质量问题,被视为虚假广告。此事在你校学生中引起很大反响。你准备写一份发言稿,话题是“Stars and False Advertisements”,内容要点包括:
1.以约30个词概括文章要点;
2.然后以约120个词谈谈你对“明星代言虚假广告”的看法,内容包括:
(1)对明星代言虚假广告是否应该为此负责的看法,并简单举例说明;
(2)作为消费者应如何避免购买明星代言的虚假产品。
[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

It is easy to be cheated by advertisement in the webside, in spite of those are super stars in HongKong. The article shows us that We shoud think clearly before we believe and try their products. In 21 century, there are plenty of new products which are special and chemical. Compare with the products in 19s, now it is more easily to appeal human beings to buy the new products . They seem to buy all those things without any other consideration. They just believe that the "effect" can be shown real to the reality. According to the passage, the star in HK should be guilty about the false advertisement . As a representative of the products, who show that the real effect to public residents and so that they are likely to believe and try it. As a smart custumer , we should think more before we really want to buy the products show in the ad. Because we should make sure the product whether is legal or not.

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