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the Dragon Boat Fastival is also called DuanWu festival.It is on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month ,which is a calendar used for agricalture purpose in China . the celebrations differ from place to place .what the most well known is memerizing a straight and honest poet who is suicided by droving himself in the river . In condition,we also do a lot of things on this day.firstly,we will eat ZongZi in the school's dining room.And then,some of us will watch the boat racing on TV.Maybe nobody knows the real meaning of this festival ,instead,people in today always aim at what to eat on festivals .I hope we Chinese can cherish our troditional festival and culture.
