2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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In the recent decades, A large amount of goods that have beautiful exteriors is a problem phenomenon.For example large boxes contains small boxes that contains more smaller boxer.A small goods has a great number of boxes and many goods have a lot of plactics. There are reason why a large amount of goods that have beautiful exterior is that person are fond of delicate exterior