2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。

With the rapidly development of society ,the computer play a more and more important role in our daily life.If without the computer ,we would not have taken substantial progress,we would not deal with tricky and complicated things,and we would not communicate with others freely and conveniently.But everything has two sides. In our daily life we would feel nervous and helpless if we could use the computer .Because the deeply use of computer make us depend on the computer very much.