2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,shopping online have been popular.And shopping become one part of our lives.Of course,every coin has his two sides. There are several advantages for shopping online.Firstly,shopping online can save our time.For example,we can shopping something we need online while we are working.Secondly,the products online is more cheap than the supermarket's.So we can save money easily.Last but not least,the way for us to get our products is very convenient. But some bad effects may confuse our choices.One one hand,there are someone cheat us by this way.On the other hand,we buy the products online,while,this is not our sizes. As far as I am concern,it is a good way for us to shopping.If we ask about the thing before we buy it,we can choose if we buy or not.Only in this way can we make a harmony society.