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The Drogan Boat Festival is one of the most important galas in China even around the world,which means reunion for the fammiles.on tha t day,family people get together to celebrate it and share their love for each family member. the normal procedure to go through the festival includes:feting the remarkale ingenious food zongzi made by sticky rice in a shade of triangle cube,bathing with the felon herb,toasting with reaglar wine and racing with the gradon boat and so forth.these activities are all full of the traditional Chinese tinge that are so intresting,making other countries and regions fall in love with it. in all,Chinese people express their love for the family by means of these activities.the word people are more and more love this Chinese traditional festival too.
