小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is xiao li ,she has a long hair and black eyes,She is very fat,She love to eat junk food.She is very nice, She always talks me something,When l have trouble,She ofen gives me a hand.l often go home with him,So l close with him in the school.