题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It is very important on people relation with maintaining trust.If everyone can do maintaining trust,it will helpful in our daily life The ture friendship is needed by maintaining trust each other what them say,and take the sincere with friend ,It can make your life more happiness.on the one hand,You can let your friend to do something you can not do.on the another hand ,on maintaining trust can make a group more and more powerful people should not live by oneself ,so let us maintaining trust on our family,friend and fellow,