2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and more people enjoin in shopping online.It is comen that you can see it everywhere.Different people have different views online shopping.Some think that it's advantage more than disadvantage.they hold the opinion that many people can shopping stay at home rather than go out.So,it save many time to do other thing. However, the other think that go out to shopping can develop our friendship with our friends and relevents.mea while,It is good for our health.because that walk can realax our bodies. As far as I am concerned,shoppiong online have many advantage,but we should keep a clearly mind,don't adicted to it .