2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

How should parents help children to be independent? this is a hoted problem was debated by many people.at present,more and more parents give their love children as much as they can.to our disappoint that make their children become lazier .and think it is grant for all. So,if you love your children,try to let them to do everything by theirselves rather than do for them.in order to help children to be independent,parents should give up doing something for them.such as make med ,wash their clothes,go to school on foot and so on. Only become independent,can to be strong person.can face difficult by yourself.can learn a lot.