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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Trust is an essential element of human's morality. Maitaining trust is never going to be a forgoten topic during the men's river of history. Keeping believing others is not an easy job as from time to time, people lie so our confidence of trust will go down. It can be severe because when there is something showing lies, we don't believe in others.And if we let it go, we will finally lose our patience to trust any body.As a result, we will also a lier.We don't trust, no one trust us. This will develope into a trust cricis in the society. So we should not lie but keep believing others, except those who is not worthy to gain our trust. In addition, we should try not doubt too much. In a short, less lies, less doubts, more trust. The world can be better, the society can be more harmoniously as long as you make yourself a part of the community on maintaining trust.

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