2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus With the development of the social ,creaing a green campus has play an improtant role in the college. However,the connotation of the green campus,not only contains the students living environment, also includes their mental environment. As we know, a green environment, which is being more and more important for the college students.But what's more, as a college student, should not only learn to protect the environment around you, learn to create the atmosphere of campus culture and civilization. So in my opinion, to creating a green campus ,the effective laws and regulations should be enforced by the government.On the other hand, as a unversity student, should realize the important of the green campus. Only in this way can we creating a green campus in the future.