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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17625
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

i agree to the statement.For the snap judgment means it hasn`t be treated serious,if we do something according to it,it will cause big demage to ourself or others. For i`m working as an project engineer now,i need to do the designing electrical wiring diagram in my routine work.when i`m doing the sizing the current of the motor,it should acccording to some rules determined by IEC or IEEE (some international electrical comittee).the current determine the facility i brought to do the controling of whole module.If i doing the calculater just by experience or snap judgement, it may cause the motor out of work or some even worse consequce.An other example is when i do the founction test ,sometimes we will found some date is not right ,we need to check the machine carefully to find out what`s the reason of it.and then doing the test very carefully. As an engineer,my work make me treat eveything very serious. So i agree snap judgements can never be trusted.

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